tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1566425963917806133.post5983018723728188267..comments2011-04-08T14:45:50.081+01:00Comments on shoes, booze and me ...: more from margy and the cake shoplouisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18339267488851813576noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1566425963917806133.post-85556766564301519542010-11-12T17:22:50.324+00:002010-11-12T17:22:50.324+00:00Well now, not sure there should be a next time - m...Well now, not sure there should be a next time - maybe with a bit of editing this might be the story in it's wholeness. There's definitely some issues with tenses, and pacing but that can be sorted with a stiff coffee and a brutal red pen sesh... All in all I am better pleased with this than I thought I would be. Once I get into the middle of the flow - it reads better. What do artists do that paint better 30 mins aftet they've started I wonder - you can't rub it out as easily.louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18339267488851813576noreply@blogger.com